KALAMAZOO, MI- Cecila Zarate-Laun, a noted Columbian humanitarian, gave a speech at Kalamzoo College, October 17th discussing the corrupt dissimulate government in Columbia and the importance of the community's active involvement in government.
I would continue as i did discussing what specifically she takled about. In this paragraph i would explain how she was passionate in her words, and exactly at what point she displayed her passion. I would then move to the nut graph where she discussed the community's involvment which explained why this is so important. I would conclude with audience responses and a good quote.
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I love your lead alot.I really struggled with mine and i did the same coverage as you. I thought it was too the point and did a good job of adresing the 5 W's
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